사람이 완전해지는 것보단 온전해지는 것일까?

사람이 완전해지는 것보단 온전해지는 것일까?

Wednesday, July 9, 2025

1:04 AM

사람이 사는 목적은 사랑하기 위해서 인 것 같다.

 

1. Language and Rhythm Adjustments ✍️

If you're writing this in Korean first, consider how the cadence will carry through translation or dual language presentation. For example:

사람이 완전해지기보다는 온전해지려는 걸까?

우리는 사랑하기 위해 사는 것 같아.

This version adds subtle fluidity. The rhetorical question gently invites reflection, and the second line avoids a passive structure—making it more present, active, and direct.

 

2. Philosophical Texture 🌱

You might layer in metaphor to deepen the meaning. For instance:

완전함은 흠 없는 조각일지 몰라도, 온전함은 흔적을 품은 이야기다. 사람은 사랑하려고 산다—그 흔적을 나누려고.

Here, you're offering contrast and inviting the reader into an emotional and philosophical space, rich with image and implication.

 

3. If framing it in English 📘

Consider:

Perhaps we’re not meant to be perfect, but to be whole.

And maybe we live to love—nothing more, nothing less.

This preserves the quiet weight of your idea while opening space for contemplation.